A Mother in Witch's ClothingChapter 1: Adrian flushed the toilet, pulled up his dragon-pattern pyjamas, and scurried back to bed. He crawled hastily between the warm Tonka blankets and fondly recalled the minor hockey game he played that day. There was a knock. Adrian poked his head out of the blankets and skimmed the room. No monsters or aliens. Perhaps one of his toys had fallen on the floor? That had to be it. Another knock. The knocking steadily grew louder and more consistent. Adrian hopped out of bed and searched high and low. Nothing. If it wasn't coming from his room, then where? The hall? He snuck out to take a peek. Still nothing. The knockin
VENAITURA Rewritten. Ch.1 Pt-2Venaitura, Issue #1 Page 11by JustinPAGE EIGHT (four panels)Panel 1. Close up on Buima's diamond necklace. In this instance, we're seeing her necklace being cut off—or rather, it has already been cut, and this occurs directly after. The two ends have just separated. It should be subtle, but the two pieces should be far enough apart for us to notice what's happening.1 SFX: TEPPanel 2. The largest panel on the page. Buima is knocked back by this incredible force—right off of her two feet! Her necklace has also been stolen by this same force. This is Fern, another of our leading characters, but for the time being he's invisib
Venaitura REWRITTENHere's the revised and rewritten script. The first 8 pages.Venaitura, Issue #1 Page 1by JustinPAGE ONE (three panels)Panel 1. Large panel. Establishing shot of VENAITURA, a magnificent tower-esque fortress that is anchored in to the earth. This is a birds-eye view. The fortress is otherworldly, and not something that could have been built by man. It exudes a terribly violent aura that has killed the local flora and fauna for miles. The fortress is surrounded by a very rugged and mountainous terrain, with dangerous bogs seeping poisonous miasma spotted along the path leading in to its hellish entryway. Three barely recognizable figures
VENAITURA CH 2 --Script--CHAPTER TWO: IN PURSUIT OF A COMMON CRIMINALPAGE SEVENTEEN. (four panels)Panel 1.FERN is hopping along a LONG AND NARROW HALLWAY that brims with darkness. Although he finds it hard to see, he still persists in running to flee from the crazed BUIMA, having witnessed her might with his own eyes in the previous chapter.SFX:PANT PANT PANTFERN:OKAY, WRONG BUNCH! THOSE PEOPLE'RE CRAZY! I'D RATHER RUN IN TO A BUNCH OF CRAZED (AND STUPIDLY RICH) VILLAINS THAN THOSE DERNGED LUNATICS! DAMN IT!AND I BET THEY DON'T EVEN HAVE ANY GOOD MONEY, EITHER...!!!Panel 2.Flashback. FERN thinks back to the incident in CHAPTER ONE where he appeare
VENAITURA --Manga Script--The world is Tsufanubra, home to Demons and Humans alike. It was not always this way, but past events lead to the joining of two vastly different races who, before that, were constantly at each others throats. It took a while for both of them to find comfort in one and others company, but when that time came, a small peacefulness swept over the land, and its people found joy and were without fear in life for the first time in what they had thought was an eternity.In the past, Tsufanubra was home only to Humans. Its opposite, Arbunafust, housed the Demons. Both worlds were joined together in a symbiotic relationship, eternally keeping the ot
Magical ARTS: Future Sample 02Okay then, I've decided on something. What is it? I'll post one more chapter. Not because I'm getting back in to all of that or anything, but rather to make a parallel between the two. While the previous was near allfocused solely on story alone, this one contains near just the same amount of fighting. I just wanted to see if I was as good with pulling off fights as I (supposedly) am with strictly story-based scenes.Thank you!Chapter EIGHT: Rauben X VinciPage 120 (five panels)Panel 1. We have gone from Andrew and William's scenario and back to the “real” world once again. We are positioned a distance away from the shop,
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